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Old 01-14-04, 06:19 PM   #25
Freeman
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iight...

im not officially in any crew... ima vote on this... you both need to elevate... here is a tip... for future reference for you both... dont write too many lines... jus stick to 10 lines each... much easier on the eye... and people dont get bored... like a did...

some good punches from both... no personals... none that a understand neway... flow was off in places from both... structure was even... close battle... both of the same level... ermmm...

vote - aines

verse was jus a little bit more complex... only reason he takes it...
props to Reign... you had a good verse... but lacked in complexity... keep elevating both of ya...

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