Killer Mc

this bitch wont last long, like weed in brass bongs
you just another fag, blowin some bitch ass songs
Shoulda Flip'd the lines
ill just have to knock'em out of his shoes, then check'em in
And stand firm, hold my nuts waitin on yo second wind
Decent
a bomb is going off in 10 seconds, kiss yo ass good reddence
(boom)told ya bitch ass i wasn't bullshittin
Blah...not that good
i fuckin hate battlin, im on some gang shit
you better duck quick,cause u might get hit
If you hate battling why are u, and he might get hit? so ur rhymes is just iffy and they might miss or hit, dont know for sure?
this is for all y'all
united i stand, united i fall
No punch
i swear to god, i will kill all y'all
You already rhymed yall, bad closing

Mc - work on ya flow, it was choppy wit all the lines lenghts varying...throw more punches too, you started off good but then....


Fo-Real

Sorry homes i was fuckin ya bitch so i was kinda late,
but rhymes like theese ya'll gonna have to wait,
personal made it a good opening...oh btw its holmes not homes
cant take my shoes bitch the shits laced up good
cuz theese cleets i'm wurrin bout to stomp ur gang and ur whole hood,
Decent punch...coulda been re-worded better
leavin a nike sign on ya face from ear to ear/
yo bomb explodin in ten seconds cool mines aimed right at you/
No rhyme...y-o-u e-a-r, nope nope
1..2..3.. fuck that i'll just pull out my gat and blast you
i'ma unmask you and show the whole world who you really is/
not an killer m.c. but an m.c. that just got killed in this
Didnt know what was goin wit what so i just took the last 3 lines. Ok ending basically, tried to play of his name but meh

Overall - Very Close Battle...but i think Fo-Real Took it

And Killer_Emcee you can only post 1 verse...not 2, dont matter how long he takes. If he broke the rules report it to IR