^^that was Just Lamb And Fuck Off Make Ya Own Thread......any way it was Whack..

Any way this was alright But Ya Structure need a bit of working on man....but ya flw was alright and there wasn't much wrong wit it man so yea that was good....Ya Vocab was To Simple...ya Wordplay also Need Working On Man But Other Wise It was Alright...I Still Think that was Too Short So its was Too Hard For u to Get betta Feedback So try and Lengthen Ya RHymes Out Aiight Man....PeacE....