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Old 01-14-04, 08:33 PM   #8
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yewa man this was alright i thought.....ya Structure is alright but its Still Needs a Lil work But it was Still Good in some places.....Ya flow was Nicely Done to worked Well With Your Vocab....so yea i enjoyed this read All the Way...so All and all this was Good Shit i Like THe way U Presented it too....PeacE OuT MaN....
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