Like everyone said...dont explain ya lines in ya verse

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* -
** -
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or something like

[ - Explanations - ]

Line 2 -
Line 6 -
Line 10 -

or you can

Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah
Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah

^^ (Explaination)

that will help wit ya flow and struct

now for ya punches....

Try to get some good personals in them.....

find out who hes loss too(although its gettin old), what crews hes in or has been in, you can play his name/custom title/sig etc, what threads hes made and openmics hes done, things hes said in chat threads, has he ever cheated...you get the picture

Dont use personals like:

I just ended this guys amazing 5 post career with 10 lines that I wrote
Shit I didn't even have to throw any punch lines cause this kids the joke

^ 5 posts wasnt that good because, well, i could make a name right now and only have 5 posts but still be good

Also work on ya rhyme scheme...if you can predict the word that its gonna rhyme wit its played

if ya need any more help hit me up on aim or pm me, aim - Potent Prospect