fuck it

dialect
listening....
the beat was good.
your lyrics were ok.
your lines are way too long.
your flow is off the whole audio.
i wasnt feelin this one untill the
last 20-30 seconds..

it
listening...
kids mad improved
since last audio.
just need to work on
fluidly constructing your lines.
lyrics were good switchin topics to fast.


i just wasnt feelin dialects piece..


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