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Old 01-14-04, 11:04 PM   #30
BaG oF SkILLz
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I wish I could herd these mindless followers into oncoming trucks
Then this shit would be fixed. No more idiots to bore me.


Damn so true lol...this had me rolling..

Thats it! I'm taking over 24 hours as I'm the true soldier.
Please just stick to nights, its hard enough being bi-polar.

LOL..once again nice line here..i can relate to this lol...very nice


Overall very good rhyme scheme and good flow...Some funny moments as i wrote above...liked it alot...keep spittin..props

8.0/10
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