ill - um well that is a pretty terrible structure there, the random caps words are pretty dumb looking, no rhyme scheme that i could detect here, no personals and pretty weak punches, also michael jackson is just a bad topic to rap about

mike - good structure except one line that was too long and screwed that up, flow was good at parts (beginning) but gets worse, a little bit of feeding of ill, punches were alright, not much for personals, and the rhymes were ok, but also kinda weak in parts (gone/wrong)

overall vote = mike