Hey, this was pretty damn good. Seriously.

Although, the style this was in, an introspective pessimistical speil, can be tedious if used too much. But it worked here since it's just one peice. I think the words flowed evenly and the rhyming was great too. The concept was sorta personalized inside ones head, but I have that kind of stream of concious stuff going on too, so I can relate.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.