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Old 01-15-04, 12:37 AM   #4
Aisle Phive
AKA Cereal Shelf
 
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From: New Jersey
IP:

Man, expected a lot more from both of you. Anyways, I'm cool with both of you, this is pure honesty.

COMs verse.

We were friends on lif.. but then you started this tif
Feebles more of a sellout than a market.. you bitch!
Nah.
I'm your target ooooh shit... Taktik... he see's the signs
He said make cuts... but meant the length of your lines!
LoL. . killer.
You said that I made you... then expelled me from the crew
Your name said you were mine... before you were you!
Blah.
So drop a ten minute key.. coz theres a dickride demand on
How can he kick me from the crew?... without a leg to stand on!
Played concept, decent flip.
Gives me advice... the fact he's wack isn't stopping him
Feeble told me to elevate.. and I landed on top of him!
Above average

Feeble's verse.

ur cut from W E .. feebz arrives & they're fit to get whored
& your sig explains your skills ... "click if your bored"
LoL, nice but could hit harder.
you have no job or life ... & no one hails this comic ass
cuz com ran out of finance, like a failed economics class ..
Boo.
I'll drown u till u say ur sorry, make you a serene apologist ..
& give u a new look at ocean bottom, like marine biologists
Decent.
com you suck, and its the truth .. any real vet knows this
'world rejects real rappers, so coms morally excellent ..
Didn't rhyme, and the punch was ehh.
all across the site.. from me to taktik.. this little bitch is hated
so he's got just about 2 / 1 friends .. made reciprocated
Decent.

Overall this battle was really half assed. Didn't seem like you tried much Feeble. COM, you had some aight lines and a few good ones, that's why you won this. Feeble, your punches were borderline wack. A few decent lines but nothing really stood out from you. The opener had potential, but wasn't worded well enough. Vocab was nice though, made me break out the ol' dictionary.

Anyway, Feeble you really came weak here, maybe you just didn't give a fuck? Not sure, COM wins due to better punches.
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