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Old 01-15-04, 04:44 AM   #5
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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my fists of fury, hittin you with punches a-plenty,
your a step down from born to kill, at the age of 20,*
im 'clockin' this new age 'grandfather' of rap,
your like a wire, as soon as heat near you, ya snap,
even deaf, and armless peeps give you the slow clap,
you try to cover it up, but like rap, you can't act.
this kid a no-body, what personals could i use,
give future battlers one, after he tooken 007s abuse.
i spit in future tense, whilst you rappin bout the past,
like bricks a window, one of us is gettin smashed....
an i can see right through you**......
a terrible waste of life, you as unwanted as the clap!!!

*Born to Kill, well known on the site, he pretty old, an EKI is twenty!!
**the window line, i can see through you = metaphor!!!
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