We were friends on lif.. but then you started this tif
Feebles more of a sellout than a market.. you bitch!
...meh kinda played
I'm your target ooooh shit... Taktik... he see's the signs
He said make cuts... but meant the length of your lines!
lol...decent
You said that I made you... then expelled me from the crew
Your name said you were mine... before you were you!
decent
So drop a ten minute key.. coz theres a dickride demand on
How can he kick me from the crew?... without a leg to stand on!
blah....half played
Gives me advice... the fact he's wack isn't stopping him
Feeble told me to elevate.. and I landed on top of him!
decent...



ur cut from W E .. feebz arrives & they're fit to get whored
& your sig explains your skills ... "click if your bored"
had a lot of potential...it was decent but coulda been good
you have no job or life ... & no one hails this comic ass
cuz com ran out of finance, like a failed economics class ..
come on feeble??...this was like his market punch: played
I'll drown u till u say ur sorry, make you a serene apologist ..
& give u a new look at ocean bottom, like marine biologists
wordplay on concept was there but explaining it made it lose luster
com you suck, and its the truth .. any real vet knows this
'world rejects real rappers, so coms morally excellent ..
not a punch not a personal nothing at all...but it does rhyme...in an indirect way
all across the site.. from me to taktik.. this little bitch is hated
so he's got just about 2 / 1 friends .. made reciprocated
not hard hitting...slightly average

Com best bar:
I'm your target ooooh shit... Taktik... he see's the signs
He said make cuts... but meant the length of your lines!


Feeble best bar:
ur cut from W E .. feebz arrives & they're fit to get whored
& your sig explains your skills ... "click if your bored"


Well feebs since you gave me good feed, I thought I return the favor. This verse was not like your regular verses. You down-played com a lot, and well it proved to be your downfall. You had some punches that were waiting to be great, but one way or another didn't get delivered. Explaining the punch over and over loses its luster and illusiveness. On the other hand your flow and rhyme scheme were nice for the most part, but this aint front lines so it doesn't mean enough.

Com your verse wasn't too bad, but stay away from played concepts. Some were flipped well enough to polish them up, but others weren't. You should try to use more direct punches, and yes I know the whole verse was direct, but some of the punches could have been edited to say another users name. Oh and there is hardly no point in telling us what we need to know, because we should be able to learn that from your verse.

vote - com for consistantcy