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Old 01-15-04, 06:23 AM   #7
RythmicTendicies
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Had some nice flow here, some good internals but i thought the bars were a little long but you pulled it off pretty well...Hook was pretty nice, looked liked the hook involved some scratching if ya get me...

Concept was pretty shallow, but i think it was executed well, i was expecting something maybe a little deeper, but we all want to put something out a little more simplistic at times, ya know. Wordplay here was mad dope:

"And we didn’t lose the track; we just lost the train that it runs with
And it’s been waiting to move, we just needed somebody to conduct"[/b[ - couldn't reists adding it, was creative.

[b]3/5
- good shit..only problem, RythmicTendicies® muthafucka!!! lol, j/k...nice drop, keep it up.
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