Yeh tay you got this. Aftre i got a headache reading you battle. I have to agree with LM lose the capitals - it will make reading more attractive. This way it looks like some little kid wrote it. Anyways you get my vote becaouse you came harder and had better punches
plz return a honest fevour
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