Com...you did the same here as against me
Your punches have potential...i keep seeing your idea's
But you dont get them across as well as i know you can
But...nice verse 2nd line was dope...
Nothing wrong technically..just your punches need developing

Feeb's...i've seen you do better, an overall good verse
A few good punches, opener was dope...
i kno you to be better than this...

Feeb's gets my vote for an overall more rounded verse
w/ a couple of slightly better punches...

V/ Feeb's