Rule with all your pieces you always bring your messages in a very strong way. This piece was written with good emotion and feeling put in to it, and it seemed natural. The flow was great and so was the structure. vocab was good for the piece. but the message was the vocal point and you did a great job describing it and putting it all in words. i like how you took alot of the problems teenagers face and put them in one poem, instead of focusing on one. you have a nice way with putting together feelings and words.

~Tera~
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