Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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i like the way you addressed your topic, the way you wrote it out and explained it. your intro pulled me into the piece for at first i couldn't see where you were taking this piece. the meaning of life is something from time to time i find myself thinking about, and i too came up with the thought that maybe there is no meaning, that we are just here to live and die, but that seems so pointless and sad. the way you ended it was well written, and ended it nicely. should post up some more from this set sometime.
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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