your intro to this piece was very well written, and pulled me into this piece. your vocab was very good, and examples you gave to explain her situation were real and simple, easy to see where you are coming from. the part about the road, about only concerned to where it starts and not were it leads, is my favorite part, for the fact that i relize i do that alot. your ending i found ended suddenly and perhaps needed some more feeling to it. but the whole piece in general was a great read.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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