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Old 01-15-04, 08:42 AM   #1
LM
Drop Of Genius
 
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Dreams of a rapper

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A rapper, a poet, a prophet, a modern day shakespeare
Writin when he can just to kick start his musical career
Blood, sweat and tears are makin sure he puts in his all
He wants to change his life but he's just hittin a brick wall
When your afraid to fall down how can you rise to the top
The only thing he's ever been good at is this life in hip hop
Viewed as a flop, he feels nothin but anger and frustration
Never happy with his skills....always lookin for more elevation
The only complication is he's inconsistant whenever he flows
Sometimes dope, sometimes wack, but that just the way life goes
But I suppose his mom was right...practise will make perfection
So he lives in hope...that one day his words will make a connection
Life's just an election....public opinions are treated like gold
But whatever people think....he will make sure his story gets told


^^This was a keystyle, took bout 10 minutes to do
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