Thread: This Goes Out To You!!!and You!!!
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Old 01-15-04, 08:50 AM   #2
LM
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I dunno where to start.....

Structure was wack....fix it.
Flow was there but it didnt improve the piece at all
This was waaaayyy to simple and next time pick a topic

OVERALL - dont quit your day job 3/10

Hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107026
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