k..i'll respect the fact that it was a keystyle....

Felt this came off a little weak, your flow was mediocre to stuff i've seen you do before, was a little simplistic, although i thought:

"When your afraid to fall down how can you rise to the top
The only thing he's ever been good at is this life in hip hop" was dope.

Your vocab was nice, some good terms in there, added a deeper meaning to the piece, pretty good for a keystle...:

"A rapper, a poet, a prophet, a modern day shakespeare" - reminded me of Renegade.....

The topic is played, and i just don't think you pulled it off convincingly, this is a step down compared to your other shit..not hating, you had some nice lines, but i just wasn't really feelin' it...

keep spittin'.