"When your afraid to fall down how can you rise to the top
The only thing he's ever been good at is this life in hip hop"

Very good

"A rapper, a poet, a prophet, a modern day shakespeare
Writin when he can just to kick start his musical career"

Good opener.

As a whole the peice was pretty descent for a key,rhymes and flowed well,afew nice lines there,some wordplay in corperated,kept me interested,solid stuff.

P.S Hit mine up if you can man.

Peace