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Old 01-15-04, 09:39 AM   #23
Straight Ace
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Weezy-Problem C
Not bad..
The concepts both of you used..weren't half bad..
Some where pretty creative but you lacked the execution..
..the right execution that is.
The structure was ok.. sometimes the flow was off..but ok..]
(note: seperating your bars is herbish..)
I can't quote.. but there where some potential quotables in there..
Ok verses.. alot of anger.. little less skill.

Born to Kill
Consistant as ever..
Everytime its the same story..strong clean structure..
Nice punches, personals..10 lines was really all you need.
I feel some punches didnt really work well..
But you had some outstanding once to, that made up for that.
Better verse... more experienced.

vote Born to Kill

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