"message it was sending, the concepts portrayed at the ending,
Though, my feelings on Weezy's "America" is still pending,"

^liked this bar alot,flowed well and used nice vocab.

As a whole the peice was a original idea,usin past legends to get there urself,wordplay was there in bits,flow was pretty good but as the others have said limit the fillers,i had the same problem tryna squeeze to much in.imagery was good aswell,vocab good too,internals so good drop man.

P.S Hit mine if u can dawg.

Peace