Like Maven said before, You incorporated alot more multies than in alot of previous pieces. Personally, I saw this as a beautiful piece laced with many many metaphors and great flow. I can't ask more from a better piece. This seemed a little bit ehh, like it was more thrown together rather than taking the time to perfect it. But it was still a good piece nonetheless.

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