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we obviously got a problem- C you too wack to give me some ~chal-lenge~//
ya rhymez wack plus dey offbeat n balance, ya too busy pickin ya nose wit ya ~pals-wrench~//
i dont give a fuck, you make no sense like 50's ~thugs~//
g-unit applies to you too, so take ya gay unit up in ya ~butt~//
problem c? sounds like a fruit drink, do you ~think?~//
im not sure if you got one but i know if you do, ya ~Crew-stinkz~//
explicit gone ripp ya get gun clapped and ripped up//
cat you'll get split up, from limb to limb, so lets what kinda diss you can~dish-up~//
30 minute time limit? fuck i could kick ya ass in a ~second~//
dont test dis, i lost da last battle so i decided to try a new ~method~//
peace im out dis bitch leavin dis pussy-whipped pussy ~"ripped"~//
cut up n shit no chance of recovery and i'm ~lovin-it~
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haha@first bar, wtf? 2nd bar, wack. 3rd bar, is that supposed to be a punch? nothin really stands out here.. nothin hits hard... lose the squigglyz~, it's annoying
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GOD dAMN" THAT'S WHAT THEY SAID WHEN UR ASS WAS BORN
MY DICK IS LIKE UR MOM'S TITS, THEY SAG TO THA FLOOR
THEY CALL ME Problem C CuZ I'M RAW AND UNCUT
i'LL LEAVE UR ASS STUTTERIN LIKE A RETARDED DUMB FUCK
NOW I'M PUTTIN U ON THA STREETS SO EVERYONE PLACE A BID
DOG, I'M BOUST TO BUST A NUT IN UR EYE SO U CAN SEE MY KIDS
UR PUNCHLINES ARE WEAK LIKE A FEMALE HITTIN' THA ROCK
I'LL BITCH-SLAP YOU EVERYTIME FOR NOT DOIN WHAT UR TAuGHT
I GOT 2 LINES TA GO SO START BEGGIN FOR MERCY
THA CLOSESTS UR ASS GOT TO A KISS WAS HERSHEYS
YO IM LIKE SHAQ IN THE PAINT CUZ I CANT BE STOPPED
U LIKE HANES UNDERWEAR CUZ U STIK TO DA COK
YO WHEN I HIT DA STREET IM LIKE A PIMPMAGNET CUZ EVERY GIRL HITZ TO ME LIKE A BARBIE SPREADIN DA MONEY,
DA CLOSEST YOU GOT TO SEX WAS MEETING DA PLAYBOY BUNNY
EVEN IF YOU DRANK HOT SAUCE AND GASOLINE U STILL WOODNT SPIT FLAMEZ
I HAVE BETTER BATTLES ON TEKKEN THE VIDEO GAME
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LOSE THE ALL CAPS. each line was a punch, but a very weak one... simple rhymes... hm.... nothin really stands out in your verse...
This battle is a toss up punches wise, really. Explicit's had better rhymes & flow & structure, wasn't all CAPS.
Vote: Explicit.
If ya guys could hit up this battle with a vote, that'd be cool.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106881