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Old 01-15-04, 04:06 PM   #3
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This was alright i thought....structure in this could use a touch up on a few bars though, just watch the line length some seemed a bit stretched but still good though i thought...you had some alright flow in this.....had some alright multies in it...overall a alright piece...keep at it.
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