iight...
can tell this is gona be a close battle...
dw... you had a tight structure dawg... some nice wordplay... some lines were quite complex aswell... flow was good through most, you just lost the flow on the closer, and once in the body of the verse... you had some nice punches in there... some hit hard... and one very long word... vocabulary... nice... but the bar where you used it didnt make sense... quite a few hard hittin personals aswell...
fav bar...
'i must be shakin ya system cos ur a nervous wreck...
i always pay 4 wot i break...so how much is ya neck...'
K... dw took you on structure a think... you did have a consistent flow tho... nice... some nice wordplay... punches about matched the standard of dw's... this is damn close...
and then...
'you'll give me another loss..thanks man thats a kind thing to do,
about 50 more offers like that and i could be....well um....you.'
it was even until you spit that... that is what won you this battle... had me laughin... very good
no hate... honest as a could be...
vote - .:K:.
both of you hit this up please...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107007
thanks...
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