ite i peeped this earlier b4 free spit and i thaught,

killas verse was ite but had streched bars and no real hard punches,
your wordplay was non xsistent but wasnt a bad verse,

then,

free,nice man youve elavated alot nice structure and complexcity, also a few hard punches in there aswell, best line had to be the closer that hit like whoa man nice drop try-out for instant..................................pz