Yo this kid is a fucking joke, who's about to drown in this game/
Plus, You suck at flow,structure and multis....and you got an unpronouncable name!/
^^Not a good opener..
I’m flaming emcees, cause I got fire for spits that put a quick end to life with placid scripts/
I’m blaming textcee’s cause if you put your rhymes to lips they sound like retards on acid trips/
^^^weak punch
I'll play you like skits and you’re the only actor/
I’m the x-factor that’s got your head half circular like a protractor/
^^eh....could've worded it better...
Takin everything i say easy, i aint a newb so stop your grinning/
Came here the day after new years...but obviously your resolution wasnt winning!/
^^concept is there but your wording's off
Wipe that smirk right off this website, every bar should be considered sins/
Wonderin about his record? Check his profile...hasnt battled a guy yet with over 5 wins!/
^^^verrry verrrrry weak closer

Overall your verse was real weak, no quotables your punches weren't landin at all and your bars were real stretched which didn't help your verse any....keep elevatin.......


How the hell you keep TALKIN SMACK
when its a LOCKED IN FACT
that your mouths had more meat in it that a fat persons SHOPPING RACK?
^^Nice couplet....wordplay's nice
you'll just get SHOCKED AN SMACKED
and CHOPPED IN HALF for DROPPIN WACK
verses that contain less "punchlines" than "a armless man in a BOXING MATCH"
^^lol....lol
and lyrically you come weaker than CHINGY'S RAPS
your flows are just SIMPLY TRASH
a verse of your rhymes have more "stretched lines" than oprah WINFREY'S ASS
lmao.....funny punch...NICE
and your in xlg cuz you cant come on this SITE ALONE
your fuckin LIFES YA HOME
id rather get shot than listen to you on a MICROPHONE
^^played and weak......
ill just STRIKE YA BONES and attack the nerve cells in your LYSOSOMES
word on the street is you had the entire RB CYPHER BLOWN
^^could've worded it better.......
just so niggas could say that the shit you SPIT WHERE HARD
your throats probably had more nuts in it than a SNICKER BAR
^Played punch.....bad for your closer

Overall your verse was aight...you had the flow and you had some originality somewhat only thing is you fell off from the middle to the end of your verse..... and stop usin the caps i think cats can catch your punches without you havin to bold it out to the world........ Nice win...

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