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Old 01-15-04, 05:14 PM   #14
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ok this battle was a typical newbie battle

retard.. the intro to your verse was weak that shit bout wickety wack.. needs to go ... also your wordplay was pretty weak lines like "you fuckin wit da retard101 nigga dat was dumb,
im stright out Cali and alredy won,
your mama be a slut a stright up ho ho ho marry christmas,
so nigga quit bitchin,"

are not getting it done.. plus your disses were pretty basic

zedd- you had some ok wordplay.. you came with some aiight punchlines and metas this shit was ok "Get it corn y rapper dont ever spit at ya dad
You ignorant fag dont get no props like small ass ads
Ill battle you in space, sea, air or land
Did you plan to get Jammed by your homeboy sand^"

you threw some nice metas and personal disses in this battle

VOTE: zedd took this battle with and overall more complexed verse.. plus his disses hit harder than retards did..
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