Vote=Gazeebo


smiley, this isn't audio, you gotta extend your punches a bit. Put some multis into it or something. I don't mean make them stretched as hell, but your verse sounded a lot like an audio verse, plus the punches were kinda played. Like the oprah winfrey's ass one, it was kinda funny/decent, but you'd be surprised at how many people use it. Very played. And no need for all that capitalization, we get your punches/wordplay.

gazeebo, you've elevated a bit since your last few battles.....some decent punches here. You came a bit played too, but the closer was a decent personal jab. Fix up your structure and work on your punches. Use multis also.

I think gazeebo got this just because he came less played and actually hit from some personal angles. So he gets my vote. Good luck.