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Old 01-15-04, 05:54 PM   #15
Envied Talent
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Vote= Gazeebo = Me= Just Kidding!!!

Breakdown
punches=
flow= smile really close tho
personals= Gazeebo
Structure= none
funny= smile
Creativity= tie
complexitiy= tie
prewritten= gazeebo your quotes are curved unlike these """""
multies=
overall=

Verse= You Had Good Punches , I LIke Your Oprah Line. But, you do have to lengthen your bars a lil bit. At first i thought gazeebo took this, but then i read your verse. NIce VErse

Gazeebo= Yo I felt ya personals. i liked the protrator line, shit was nice. but you need to shorten your lines, i hate long lines, so thats what brought you down. nice verse though...juss didnt come as hard as ...

vote= , possibly the best name ever lol
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