damn, again, u make another great poem. i liked it alot, mostly becouse of the similes and metas. the imagery didnt really get me that much becouse it was mostly similes and metas. vocab was very well done with good words that i could understand and ones that i liked. the message was very well made and was felt fresh even tho it is kinda a regular topic. still powerfull though. great, id give the poem an 8.5 outa 10, but hey thats just me, keep writing and keep showing us those skillz.

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