Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP:
yea castro's gay.....
i liked this peice a lot.....each line had alot of meaning, the rhyme sheme was good.....
the topic was interesting...you stayed consistant with it Most of the time......
could have better structure, but it's fine for this piece...your vocabulary is broad, and it showed....i like your metas....i lied the piece overall it was great.......i guess legendary i dunno.....i have no say in that......but good job either way
KEep DrOpPiNg
Oh, and peep "truth is..." by me, piecce
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