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New to RB
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IP:
A rapper, a poet, a prophet, a modern day shakespeare
Writin when he can just to kick start his musical career
/\ 8/10 nice opener
Blood, sweat and tears are makin sure he puts in his all
He wants to change his life but he's just hittin a brick wall
/\ 8/10 nice metaphor
When your afraid to fall down how can you rise to the top
The only thing he's ever been good at is this life in hip hop
/\ 9/10 deep shit right there . . nice
Viewed as a flop, he feels nothin but anger and frustration
Never happy with his skills....always lookin for more elevation
/\ 9/10 nice.. nice..
The only complication is he's inconsistant whenever he flows
Sometimes dope, sometimes wack, but that just the way life goes
/\ 10/10 i'm a newbie . . i can relate . . LOL
But I suppose his mom was right...practise will make perfection
So he lives in hope...that one day his words will make a connection
/\ 8/10 deep bar . . nice..
Life's just an election....public opinions are treated like gold
But whatever people think....he will make sure his story gets told
/\ 10/10 nice closure . . i like that
/\ 62/70 i liked this peice . . 88% B+ work dawg . . keep droppin hotness . . well in this case . . deepness . . get at me! blah! i'm outtie!
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