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should of called it look at me 20 odd times an sleep on me!!!!
Could've been re-worded better..but strong message..ok vocab..
i watch through my cig smoke, using my eyes,
contemplating susicide, pondering my demise,
but from beyond what lies, death in the skies,
i've had too many tries, at a bleek, failing life,
if offered one more reprise..............
.....would i take it, or again shun evil's diguise,
false hope cries, thinking back about the lies,
i seem to realize, things that shock an surprise,
asking my self.. no replies, my mind denies,
cant do nothin as my pity multiplies......
as i near the end, my cigerette, smoke dies,
Dont do it! lol..pretty good..nice sharp..clear message,
Nice vocabulairy nice little read.. try to expand &..
advance your pieces though..but this was ok.
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