Yeah I agree this was a very dope piece....read it twice because I loved it lol....you had nice imaginary in this, i enjoyed that...i liked how you described things in this piece, it made me want to keep reading on....everything really seemed good in this piece, nothing seemed bad at all...overall it was a nice piece, it made a good read and I enjoyed it, legend worthy this, good concept, vocab, flow, & a dope story in it.