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Like LitEnd said, i have also been giving a earlier read, but this is one of those rare pieces you can read over & over again..
The imagery was so near perfect that it almost created visuals infront of me, picturing the surroundings of what was being described.
The fine array of words made for this dreamy yet realistical feel, very two faced..
The strongness of the piece never faded away at any point & continued right to the very end.
To be honest the ending of the piece is perfect..
Again a perfect ending.. which makes for this extra impact when writing feedback.
You managed to keep it interestin' at all times. very dope.
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