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Your first verse...the flow was very good easy to follow, your starting line was great it grasped thereaders attention with the word usage also the way you put forth a girls type of devils mentality with being a mother and so on. that really brought power to that verse and showed a lot of common sence that we normally hide from. Great read for the start.
Second verse i felt lacked some...modivation...it wasn't as catchy...but after bout the first 3 lines....you both came well together and kept on fitting the puzzles pieces together. the ending was a great way to finish. i loved that south east north...then west must speak...that was cool.
Over all this was honeslty a great drop. very well writtin and a good collab. for the second verse.
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