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..Soft Focus..
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IP:
Decent battle Twest i think got this...but heres the breakdown
T-west- more creative and harder personals....more indepth and on point structered his better increasing the flow.
holster- you came back well better then expected, a lot of nice lines but nothing overly impressive, your structer is kinda basic i think you should just try and drop like a paragraph type thing with even lines...might help ye
over all....vote t west
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