Ok dev, heres my feedback:

It was a good piece. I was feeling it a lot, but than again topics like this get to me. You used good vocab and your flow was oright. It was easy to go along with this piece and it kept me thinking, thats what i like. Talking about the verse, it had a lot of truth about it and gives evryone an insight on how things arel. I really enjoyed this.

You could shorten your lines to make it more appealing, since some people might get lost in the streched lines. Not me however and i give you 8.5/10.

plz return the fev
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107227