Ok . This was a really nice piece. I connected right from the beggining , and followed through to the end. I ussualy get easily distracted , or lose focus but this kept me going. I like how you used complicated vocab -and still the verse was easy to go along with, plus adressed the topic in such an original way. This gets a 9.5 out of me. Keep doing this shit, and ill keep reading!

plz if you have time check this out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107227