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Old 01-15-04, 09:28 PM   #22
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this sample is chill....i feel it

nice multis...not a bad beat...good quality, and good flow...choppy occasioanlyl but thats aight it dont sound bad...

the hook is catchy..or woul dbe if i could undertand it ...ya might wanna turn down the beat a bit

i may be wrong but i think you rhymed cats twice... the voice cut gets irritating after a while... wow good line "Ill be alive until i'm dead"...deep shit

not feeling the first couple lines of he third verse...the gaps in the lines... nice multis...good message if i understand it right....

the hook is a bit low, i hear you trying kleep the sunshine, thats it....

overall one of the better songs thats been on rb

9.1/10
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