OK I like pieces that really get me into the story. This is exacly what it did. I followed the jurney and visualised it , and it was great. I loved the way you looked at this topic, in such a original and imaginative prospective. Reading pieces like this in Open Mike just proves how much talent there is on RB.com . This was of the top of the shelf, and all the props to you.

plz if you can return the fev
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