yo Gene You started this off nicely man ya first Verse People could Really Relate To..and ya verse in the middle was good but i still think the first verse was the best..ya structure has really Improved since THe Last Couple Of Open Mics I have read Of Your and Ya Flow is Still one of your strong points in ya O/m...ya Skill level has Risen alot As u u write and Can't wait to read More man....

Yaz You Came Alright in ya First verse but was that long so it was a bit hard to Generate Decent Feedback Off the First Verser but your second one was really Nice I enjoyed it alot...ya structure is like the Style is more of an Audio THen Txt But still Goes Nicely....ya always had That Nice flow when ya Rhyme still The SAme But Ya have Changed it a bit.......

Yall I Have Seen alot Of ya work Over MSN and RB So I can tell yall have elevated alot Keep that Shit Droping From Ya Both.....PeacE....