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Old 01-15-04, 11:57 PM   #6
FuE-xIoN
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Nice Battle Here.. Bribe Had Nice Wordplay And A Few Good Personals..But Feeble Pretty Much Killed This Battle In Punches And He Equaled Up In Personals....He Also Had A Better Structure...

Qoutables:
Quote:
Originally Posted by K.Largo
we know your running for supermod ...and slowly cprogress
but I'll let u beat me ...if your campaigning for status

Funny And Nice Personal..Good Job, LoL

Quote:
Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
Largo its time to clean up your mess, i even threw in the rag
only time he's outta my league, is when i boot him from tag'd

Nice Personal And Good Humor..

Quote:
Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
when i think of the legends, your image is lingering slow ...
cuz if this shit is wack, u taught me everything that i know

Witty And Funny, LoL

Feeble Also Had A Few Other Better Lines, The VB3 Line Was Good And His Closer Was Ok...

Personals - Tie
Punches - Feeble
Structure - Feeble
Vocab - Feeble (Some Parts Of Bribe's Didnt Rhyme...budget/plummet)
Wordplay - Bribe
Opener - Feeble (Bribe's Was Played)
Closer - Tie (Neither Were Too Bad)

Vote - Feeble, Just Better Overall Verse And Harder Punches
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