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Old 01-16-04, 02:15 AM   #32
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Illamintid

"2) This cat MADE his first MISTAKE ~ tryin to battle against ME/
this blind SNAKE is chopped STEAK ~ his DESTINY’s to lose to me//"

^^^Not a bad punch right their. Could have came a lil bit harder but not bad.....

"4) You was brain-DEAD before I IMBEDDED your spine into your SKULL/
I shoved your nose BONE up your forehead ~ shattered your CRYSTAL//"

^^^Also one of your more stronger punchs. Nice internal rhyme...flow was their and it rhymed well....nice punch


Michael Madness

"Moral of the rhyme being, this Bitch could never b hard /
u call me brain less, well if I am , U mustve been born a retard /
But Ima stay spittin till the best in me is gone /
u said destiny will bring u to win , More like destiny will prove u wrong /"

^^^I liked those too punchs right their. They both hit hard and had nice creativity.

"The site of your text makes me want to Sick n want to hearl /
Fact is...I've seen harder punches thrown from a six yr old girl /
Youv'e mixed w/ the most maddest in the world,
So peeps, I must merk him
Then he'll be off of R-B fer 10 Days , Cryin 1 day for each line that hurt him//"

^^^them punchs right their were easily some pre-school raps right their kid. Reading this i felt that you could have been alot more creative and more witty but w/e....

THE FINALE OUTCOME

Illmintid----->>>> You had a pretty straiight verse. You had some nice punchs...good flow and nice creativiy

Michael M----->>> You also had some nice punchs, nice flow. Only down fall would be that you werent so creative in your punchs.

VOTE---- ILLMINTID

Be easy you two....1
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