thought it was decent in places, but some better vocab would add to the read... also some of ya lines were jus basic..

how u figure nigga, 80shots came here to be fake//
its like ima chewing off this niggeaz rhymes, 2 have a slice of this cake//
^^
add to the scheme and lose these sorta lines... but i ya seem to be getting a bit better, since i last read one of your drops......
return the favour......