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Old 01-16-04, 12:18 PM   #14
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Ok, here's tha breakdown:

COM

We were friends on lif.. but then you started this tif
Feebles more of a sellout than a market.. you bitch!
^^weak opener... not creative, use of the word "tif" should get you shot LOL
I'm your target ooooh shit... Taktik... he see's the signs
He said make cuts... but meant the length of your lines!
^^nice punch... semi witty
You said that I made you... then expelled me from the crew
Your name said you were mine... before you were you!
^^shows some skill here.. could have been better but OK punch
So drop a ten minute key.. coz theres a dickride demand on
How can he kick me from the crew?... without a leg to stand on!
^^love this one.... set up was good, nice punch
Gives me advice... the fact he's wack isn't stopping him
Feeble told me to elevate.. and I landed on top of him!
^^elevate is to rise... landing on is to fall... blah

and FEEB

ur cut from W E .. feebz arrives & they're fit to get whored
& your sig explains your skills ... "click if your bored"
^^^nice opener... good punch
you have no job or life ... & no one hails this comic ass
cuz com ran out of finance, like a failed economics class ..
^^^not too creative here but OK
I'll drown u till u say ur sorry, make you a serene apologist ..
& give u a new look at ocean bottom, like marine biologists
^^^Illest punch in the battle, niiice
com you suck, and its the truth .. any real vet knows this
'world rejects real rappers, so coms morally excellent ..
^^LOL
all across the site.. from me to taktik.. this little bitch is hated
so he's got just about 2 / 1 friends .. made reciprocated
^^^ok closer...


this one was close for me... I think Feeble dropped below his ability, COM seemed like he wanted it more, but at the same time, Feeb hit harder to me. I have to give it to Feeb - more personals, and Com that opener really sucked. Good drop though by both, vote goes to Feeb

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